On Monday room 15 went to the hall, “It’s an Obstacle course” I said to myself. We were all amazed with excitement. Until Mr Marks said “ This is a blindfold obstacle course you have to be in pairs and it’s not a race” So I partnered up with Lee. I was the one who was blindfolded first, “ Where are you buddy” I asked after I was blindfolded. “I am behind you” Lee replied. I was following his voice, “Put your leg up higher” He said, so I moved up a tiny bit then lifted my leg up. I kept on walking straight across, then I fell down onto the ropes, they felt like rubber snakes.
Then I was up to the rugby bags, I fell on the skinny rugby bag and hit my head on the floor when I fell over the blue rugby bag. I was up to the cone where you hade to zig zag i crashed into cones.Then I was up to the tarpaulin it was dark under it because I had the blindfold on and was under the tarpaulin too.
I was going crazy under the tarpaulin because I couldn’t get through it. When I was up to the mat I tripped and fell. I was up to the big blue `mat but before I got there I crashed into the wall then into Lee then I got up the stairs. I didn’t know where Lee was because I couldn’t hear him speak.
My blindfold was slipping down but I tried to keep pulling it up. It was no use so I just jumped. Then it slid onto my neck.
Hi Francis,
ReplyDeleteI bet you had an lot of fun with your partner Lee. You know when it was my turn I fell of the tackle bag because of my partner Leka. Was it creepy and scary.
Great piece of writing Francis. You have produced some very effective paragraphs with some interesting vocabulary to make the writing really enjoyable. I am happy to see that you have used a variety of sentence types, with some good use of speech.
ReplyDeleteIn the future see if you can keep up the variety of sentence beginnings all of the way through as you started to repeat your self a bit towards the end.
I really enjoyed reading it though Francis. Well done.
hi Francis
ReplyDeletethat is a cool sentences and your picture too.
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