Sleeping In A Tent
On Wednesday night we slept in our tents on the lumpy uneven ground. Luckily Semi used his sleeping bag as a mattress so we didn’t touch the ground and have sore backs in the morning. In the morning Miss King said “ Wake up campers hurry up”. I said to myself that I didn’t want to wake up but I had to. After I was dressed I ran as fast as I could before my feet got cold on the grass, but it was so cold it made my feet freeze!!
That ground sure was uncomfortable wasn't it. I bet you were thankful you were sharing with Semi.
ReplyDeleteYou have doen well to use a variety of sentence types and you have managed to think about most of our checklist for writing an effective paragraph.
Do you think you have managed to write your paragraph about one main idea? I think possible you could have written more about sleeping on the tent and made two paragraphs. Something for you to think about when next writing.