Thursday, June 28, 2012

ALIEN PET SHOP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

once upon a time there was a boy named Francis he was watching                                                                 Tv until he heard a noise outside he looked around and saw nothing all of a sudden an alien sprung off the top of the roof and took me away to a different galaxy in outer space. When the alien landed the spaceship he put me in a Pet shop, Francis said to himself “what is happening why am I in a pet shop” thinking about it he suddenly saw another alien look through the pet shop window. The alien dem to the shopkeeper “dglwsfiueagjkdcsdfhifglds” (“ I want to take that weird looking petI”). Seeing an alien open the cage i move back so that the shopkeeper cannot reach me sadly he grabs me and puts me in the costumers hand. Trying to struggle out of the aliens we go out the door into his spaceship he flies home and grabs me I look around and spot a cage “ AGH” I said to myself as he put me in the cage. When it was time for lunch he made  squishy slimy octopus guts for me it was very very very very very DISGUSTING I spat it out and put it in the bin next to me in the cage. Later on when he needed to buy something he forgot to take me with him when he left a stranger came up to the door ripped it off it was a ROBOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I thought he was going to kill me he was actually on the humans side. Looking at the back of his body he had a zipper I opened and saw some hair then he had rocket shoes on crashing through the roof we both flew to earth but before we blasted off I pulled the zipper back up so he wouldn’t choke from the air of space.

1 comment:

  1. Francis you really need to edit your work and make sure your paragraphs are no more than four sentences long. I didn't want to read this beacause it looks to hard to read.


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