Wednesday, May 29, 2013

Chimpanzee and The Crime!

It was a very odd day for a chimpanzee a humble chimpanzee. His name was Ed he had a partner but although his partner had been murdered. The chimpanzee was trying to solve a crime a crime of someone stealing a car. When Ed returned to his house his partner was on the floor. Then I walked in and saw Ed “EEK AAK” Ed said “What happened Ed?” I asked “Eek Aak” Ed replied.The thief had murdered Ed’s Partner so Ed swore to get revenge. “Ed lets go catch the thief” I said “Eek Ook” He said.

As I looked around for a handprint Ed called me “Eek Aak” He said “I’m coming Ed” I replied. I saw a gun and then I studied it very closely, Ed was wearing a very strange top. I noticed Ed had a tear down his eye “Ed what’s wrong” I asked “Eeeeeek” Ed said sadly “Oh that’s very sad” I wished Ed’s Partner wasn’t dead.

Something shot straight out of the sky and straight through the house where Ed and I are in. It was an alien ship. “Eek Aak??” Ed said “These day’s are just getting weirder and weirder” I said. A Alien Jumped out dizzy and then he said “Greetings Earthlings” “You Talk!” I yelled “Yes and so will your friend” The alien blasts Ed and Ed can talk now. “Cool” Ed said “My name is Justin” Said the alien “I crashed here when something shot my ship” “Well we are trying to catch the thief” I said “Yes we are” Ed said.

The thief was on a building listening to everything they said. Then they heard a noise on the roof and the thief jumped off and started running then Justin Ed and I ran after the thief and we trapped him no where to go but a brick wall behind him Justin zapped the thief and the thief yelled out his name “ROOOOOBEEEERRRRTTT” and then Ed and I grabbed cuffs and cuffed him. Then the cops came and threw him in the back of the police van. “At least I took revenge for my partner”  Ed said “Don’t worry me and you will solve crimes from now on” I said to cheer Ed up.

“Ed are you hungry?” I asked, “Yes Crimes make me hungry” Ed said “Ok where should we go?” I asked. “Subway?” Ed said “Sure sounds good” I replied. We walked to Subway and The shopkeeper said “No Pets aloud” “I’M NOT A PET I’M A CRIME SOLVER CHIMPANZEE” Ed yelled back furiously “Woaw Ok.... I take your word” The shopkeeper said. “Can I have the meatball sub with Onion Bacon BBQ Sauce and Cheese” I said “And I will have the same please” Ed said “Ok” The shopkeeper handed their meatball sub “That will be five dollars” “Here you go” I replied handing the five dollars. Ed and I ate our meatball subs and then we were full “That was delicious” I said “Mmhmm” Ed replied. Ed and I hopped in the car and we went home.

It was night by the time we got home, “Goodnight Ed” I said “Goodnight” He replied. We slept and didn’t wake up afterwards because we had a long night.Then we woke up and just did some regular stuff. “Glad nothing strange is going on today”Ed said “Yep just a normal day” I replied, Me and Ed were still sad about John (Eds Partner) “John was a great sidekick” Ed said “JOHN WAS A SIDEKICK?!?!!?” I said confused “Yes he was anyway lets go do something”

Me and Ed were playing then Ed fell through the ground “Ed??” I said “Ed are you ok?” “Eek Ook” Ed said, when he hit the ground he lost his voice. “Uh Oh” I said “Here we go again” “Eeek Ook”

Be on the lookout for CHIMPANZEE AND THE CRIME PART 2 “Wait What Part 2 Are you serious” I answered back at the narrator  Yes now let me finish ok “Eek Aak Ook Eek Aak Ook” Ed laughed.  Be quiet please monkey. Ok anyway Part 2 is coming out in June.  “I will Get out of Jail” Said Robert The Thief. Dun Dun Dun......

1 comment:

  1. Hi Francis I like your story about CHIMPANZEE AND THE CRIME.It is an interesting story and I can't wait to part two comes out.

    From Calvin K


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