WALT: Show not tell when writing a paragraph
Feeling like you’re going to crash it lands and gets ready for boarding. Finding some seeds Louis instantly spots a place to park but someone steals it so Louis just goes and grabs the seeds, next they drive on out and plant the seeds. Its time for harvest season, Louis goes outside and look at that “John come here!” Louis demanded “Coming,” he replied. They noticed someone running away he then tripped up. The spinning in hate Louis called the police and the next night traps were placed. The thief came and stole another bit of seeds, he ran but fell into a ditch. The cops then caught him and thanks for the cops heroism Johnny & Louis could live happily for ever as long as they live.
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