The Amusement Park

The sun had drew itself up slowly, it was the start of a great day, Carlos woke up and stared outside into the daylight. He then jumped into the shower and had a wash after he finished he got out and dried after that he got dressed. He walked downstairs and went to have some breakfast “Good morning dear” his mother said but Carlos didn't answer he just sat and the table ready for some pancakes.

After he finished he went to the most fun place “Hey Carlos!” someone yelled, He looked around and then he heard the voice again “Carlos over here!” He looked behind him and to his surprise it was Jack & Gibson... The twins. “Hey guys sorry didn't see you two there” Carlos replied, Carlos looked at all the rides he saw one it was named ‘The Death Coaster’. “No way” Carlos exclaimed he imagined what it would be like on it so he ran over with Gibson & Jack Tailing. He went up to it and sat down along with Gibson & Jack in the back one. “Carlos are you sure about this????” Gibson asked “Of Course,” Carlos snapped, and then a while later some more of Carlos’ friends hopped in their names were Jim & Justin, Justin sat next to him and Jim sat next to some sweaty man.

The Death Coaster started it slowly approached the top of a drop but once it got up, Death just stopped. But then a sign said something about the coaster “SORRY ABOUT THIS BUT IT SEEMS WE HAVE SOME TECHNICAL DIFFICULTY” Carlos smashed at the chair in front of him violently, but as he did it only moved a little bit, “EVERYONE PUT YOUR HEADS DOWN!!” a man said, everyone listened and put their heads down (except for Carlos who was mad).

The man came and forced Carlos’ head down and a chopper came and pushed them it built enough speed that it could go around the track. Jack looked at the chopper and saw a wire “Hmm I guess the choppers been wired maybe because...” he paused and then figured it out but Gibson said it “...It was meant to do it  because it never actually broke down it was meant to happen!” Meanwhile, Carlos had settled down and the ride had finished.

The Amusement Park was closed the sun had started to set and the moon had started to rise Carlos and his friends looked at the stars, the moon, then they all went home Carlos’ mother came and said “Need a ride dear?” Carlos looked at his friends and said “No thanks Mom I think we’ll walk.” Carlos eventually got home and went to sleep.

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