Show Not Tell Exercise 2

Here is our second exercise.

Mary was hopping up and down like some apples being juggled because her older sister Jan was going to take her shopping at the mall to get a new piece of clothing that would fit."Hurry Mary we'll be late. We have to leave in a few minutes," Jan yelled frantically yelled. "Hurry up!!!".
"But sister I can't find my other shoes!" Mary whinged. Jan picked up her car keys off the bench and walked towards the door. Mary thought she would leave without her. She started to run round the house frantically trying to find her shoes.

It was the last stretch of the finals match of the basketball competition. Tama was shooting 3 penalty. you hear three aw's in a row. He feels like he has let the whole team down. When one of the kids in his team jokes about it sarcastically Tama looks at him while starting to bounce the ball and throw it at at his face.