Friday, August 17, 2012

Francis Bbq


Have you been working hard every term? Yes! Well Rm15 got a special treat on the 14th of Tuesday. We got to have sausages!! I can tell you how we made it, all you have to do is sit back and read.

One Tuesday morning Mr Marks said “Today we will make a Barbeque with sausages” The whole class was excited!! Mr Marks had some knives in the office along with some sausages Mr Marks bought from the Mad Butcher's, Tomato sauce and Barbeque sauce, Onions, and a grill that   was small so we had to use a table for it to sit on. When I got a turn cutting an onion I started to get watering eyes, when the onions were cut I started to peeling them into smaller rings. Once I finished I went out to see how Lee & Taniela was doing with the bbq “So hows it like to grill?” I asked “Actually its quite fun” Lee replied.With nothing else to do I waited impatiently for the sausages to be ready. Hearing the sizzling noise come from the sausages some of the sausages were rotating by themselves, I ask “How come that the sausages are moving?”  “They sometimes do that” Lee said. I said impatiently “I wish they are ready now” “Me too” Lee said.

When we got back from Mr Jacobson's Music Rm the sausages were ready. “Yum Yum can’t wait to eat it” I said as I walked towards the bread.I went over to Mr Marks where he had the sausages and onions “Want any Onions?” Mr Marks asked “Yes please” I replied after getting some onions and a sausage I walked towards the door to get some Tomato & Bbq sauce “Thanks” I said to Meleane “Its ok” Meleane replied. It looked like it was wrapped in a bread blanket. Looking at my sausage my stomach started growling with excitement because it was hungry and it was really really delicious “Ok Ok” I said sharply back to my stomach. I took a bite and it was really crispy and crunchy, munching on my sausage my stomach didn’t feel empty any more actually it was full.

When I finished my sausage I went in and said “Mr Marks can I have another one?” “Not enough besides the teachers need some” Mr Marks said. Thinking and thinking I looked at the list and saw Ms King’s name “Mr Marks can I take one to Ms King?” I asked “Sure” Mr Marks said. Grabbing a piece of paper and bread Mr Marks put a sausage on the bread with Bbq & Tomato sauce, I walked down to Rm13 “Hi Ms King” I said “Hello” she said back “I bought you a sausage from when Mr Marks made a Bbq” “What's the occasion?” Ms King asked “No occasion Mr Marks just made some for other teachers though so yea no occasion” I said as I handing the sausage into Ms King’s hand.  “Do I have to pay” “No” I replied “Francis tell Mr Marks I said thanks” Ms King told me.

When I returned I said “Mr Marks Ms King said thanks” “Ok” Mr Marks said. Just some teachers got sausages. Once the bell rung we all went outside and ate our lunch when the 1:10 bell went we all played on the court. When the 2:00 bell went we all went inside and did some work. There was crumbs all over the bay when we finished eating. The 3:00 bell went and we all went home.

1 comment:

  1. Great writing this week Francis. I am really happy to see you using speech and a variety of sentence beginnings Really well done on this.

    The only thing I think you need to work on is making sure your paragraphs only have 3-4 sentences in them. Sometimes it is better to just tell the really important and interesting parts of your story.

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