Hearing the lunch bell ring I hopped up and start running to the field waiting to start training. Seeing Mr Harris with the soccer ball and post’s “Mr Harris can i hold the soccer ball please?” I asked “Ok” replied Mr Harris. Kicking the ball onto the field I soon noticed my team and the opposite team too.
When everyone was here Mr Harris told us to markup and break free. Hearing the whistle I kicked the ball to Lee and he started running with it when he was nearly at the end Kori-lee marked him so he quickly passed the ball to me, looking around for a free partner I spot Iisa “Pass the ball to me” Iisa shouts, moving up to the goal closer and closer I pass the ball to Iisa and he shoots the ball into the the goal. When we got to the middle Mr Harris put the ball down and Kori-lee passed the ball to Henry, Henry started running up to the goal then I slid and kicked the ball from Henry. The ball went to Lee, suddenly he went sprinting down the field and got a goal.
In some last minutes my team got the victory by three points we had ten points and the other team lost at the points at seven. We all had a good game and we gave each other respect when we played besides it’s not about winning it’s more about fun. Once we helped each other up from the mud in the grass when we all got up we looked at the destroyed grass we were really exhausted.
Francis I am really happy to see you have so much to write about which is a great improvement in effort on your part. I can still tell you need to work on editing as the second paragraph has one very very very long sentence in it. Please edit.
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