Wednesday, August 8, 2012

Triple X's Story

One very cold night in the town of hoof-ten lived a senator named Triple X. He was sleeping in a house he had been exhausted from all the work he had been doing. He fell asleep on his bed with his door unlocked by mistake and during that night he was robbed!! It had been an alien!! Seen he had been sleeping with hard work he felt cold air on his face. Suddenly he got up really fast he grabbed a T-shirt went to where the phone was but it wasn’t there so he went to the garage and his car and motorbike was not there either “Oh No I was robbed by two robbers” said Triple X he closed the garage making sure that his garage and door was locked then he went running at first he was a little slow but he got faster and faster and faster when he was running he soon got to his friends house and asked “Have you seen any... ...Oh my you have been robbed too!” “yea they even took my best thing my BIG T.V.” said Sagnoid sadly “Hey wanna come I am trying to get all my stuff and if you want to come you can ok” suggested Triple X “Ok at least my car wasn’t stolen lets go I’ll bring it around the front out of the garage” said Sagnoid “Ok there’s no time to waste” said Triple X excitedly “One more thing Triple X” said Sagnoid “yea?” said Triple X “why are you so excited” “Because I don’t have to run any more I barely caught my breath running” said Triple X “Oh ok” said Sagnoid. Just then Sagnoid bought out two motorbikes “What?” said Triple X “You’re gonna drive one Triple” replied Sagnoid “Oh” said Triple X. Starting the engines on the motorbikes they saw the two aliens that stole their stuff “THERE THEY ARE” said Triple X angry Vr Mmmm the motorbikes started up Triple X and Sagnoid drove off fast. Once they got to the school Triple X’s Motorbike and Car were sitting in the school carpark then when they entered the school the two aliens were trapped in the english room "We've got you now!!". Later that night Triple X finally got to go to sleep or did he? OH NO HERE WE GO AGAIN!!!

1 comment:

  1. Wow that is an intimidating piece of writing Francis. My first and only question for you is, have you edited your work using the effective paragraph checklist? It doesn't look like it! I chose not to read it because of this.

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